托福独立作文万能模板 托福独立作文的评分标准

说到托福写作，小编记得之前有给大家分享过的托福独立写作万能开头介绍，大家可以去看看哦。托福写作分为综合写作和独立写作，托福写作是不太需要华丽词藻的，相反的需要你接地气地把故事写清楚，不太有语法错误，10岁的美国小孩能看懂的文章，那就是一篇好的托福作文啦。针对独立写作，在备考的时候建议自己写一些比较通用的万能素材和万能模板，因为托福写作评分标准中有明确的字数要求不能低于300字，想要在规定时间内写完作文，模板和素材就起到了很大的作用啦。所以今天小编给大家主要分享的是托福独立作文万能模板。

一、托福独立作文万能模板

1.Depending on personal experience, personality type and emotional concern, we find that some people hold the idea of A meanwhile others prefer to B, from my point of view, it is more advisable to chose A rather than B. My arguments for this point are listed as follows.

The main reason for my propensity for A is that___________________________.就

理由进行解释_____________________.For instance,____________________

Another reason can be seen by every one is that____________________________.就

理由进行解释___________________For example,____________________

The argument I support in the first paragraph is also in a position of advantage because_____________________________

Although I agree that there may be a couple of advantages of B, I feel that the disadvantages are more obvious. Such as________________.

In a word, ________________________________________________.So, it is sagacious to support the statement that it is better to A.

2.A or B

将原题复述___________________________________________When faced with the decision of A of B, quite a few would deem that______________________, but others, in contrast, believe A/B as the premier choice and that is also my point. Among countless factors

which influence -A/-B, there are three conspicuous aspects as follows.

The main reason for my propensity fo _________is that___________________

The second reason can be seen by every person that________.

In addition, these reason are also usable when we consider that_________.

There are some disadvantages in____________________另一种观点的缺点__________.

In a word, _____________重复观点句并缩写理由__________________.Taking into account of all these factors, we may reach the conclusion that___________.

3.单一命题式

The answer of this statement depends on your own experience and life style. In my point view, buying computers is as important as, if not more important than, buying books. So it is sagacious to ____________.Among countless factors which influence the choice, these are three conspicuous aspects as follows.

The main reason for my propensity for__________is that____________.

Another reason can be seen by every person is that________________.

Futhermore,______________.

In short,_________________复述前文中的理由______________.

4.Agree or disagree

Some people argue as if it is a general truth that a_____________________________.But to be frank, I cannot agree with them. There are numerous reasons why I hold no confidence on them, and I would explore only a few primary ones here.

The main problem with this argument is that it is ignorant o the basic fact that______________解释本段中心___________.

Another reason why I disagree with the above statement is that I believe that______________.

What is more, some students are interested in____________.

In a word, ________________.

二、托福独立作文的评分标准

1、观点明确

观点是一篇文章的灵魂。如果刚刚准备作文，看到题目，不知道怎么样说，那么可以先参考前面已经通过托福考试的前辈的范文。一来看别人是如何阐述自己观点，二来也算同时准备口语。但是到了后期，一定要看到一个题目的时候，能形成自己的观点，而不是人云亦云。这一点是托福独立写作能够拿到高分的最重要的因素。

2、逻辑清晰，论据具体

托福独立作文要求展开充分well developed。怎么叫充分展开呢，一个题目，如果表示完全同意或反对，那么就显得太极端，太片面，通常只能得到很低的分数。但是简单的各打五十大板的做法也不可取。最简单的解决办法就是在照顾平衡的基础上有所侧重，也就是说，在论述一个问题的时候，一定要有所倾向，但是对另外的观点也要适当的着些笔墨。

除了清晰的逻辑，还需要具体合适的论据以及例子。建议考生不要去背别人的例子然后生搬硬套到自己的文章中去。例子不在多，在于是否贴切（appropriate），有说服力的例子一两个就足够了。

3、语言

托福独立作文的语言上面达到以下3个要求就足够了：准确、流畅、丰富。准确是最基本的，要求考生的文章在拼写、语法、用词以及搭配上没有严重的错误。流畅是指文章整体的行文要一气呵成，逻辑进路清晰可见。在做到准确、流畅的基础上，语言的丰富多变是体现一个考生语言能力的重要指标，在同一篇文章里，用词要尽量避免重复，适当的时候，可能还要运用一些修辞手法。

三、托福独立作文范文

如何提升社区环境What is the most useful action for people to help environment in their local communities?

1. Plant trees and create parks

2. Persuade local shops to stop providing plastic bags for consumers

3. Increase access to public transportation (such as buses and trains), and reduce the automobiles on roads

范文：

With the sense of community becoming much stronger, how to protect the environment of local communities has never failed to attract the attention of the general public. Therefore, when it comes to which is the most feasible measure to help environment, among planting trees and building parks, encouraging local shops to stop using plastic bags, and improving public transportation, people's notions may vary from one to another. Towards such a long-running tug-of-war, I am inclined to claim that the first option is the best.

Firstly, growing trees and constructing parks can definitely help to ameliorate the environment. For one thing, more trees will contribute to the improvement of the air quality of the whole neighborhood. As is common sense, the prosperous industrial development has produced large amounts of waste gas, with the result that the haze and smoggy weather shroud quite frequently the major cities in our country. The current air condition necessitates the planting of trees, which can purify the contaminated air to a large extent. In other words, trees, the lung of the earth, play a vital role in absorbing some harmful gas and producing more fresh air through photosynthesis. For another, the public parks can be helpful to increase the biodiversity of the local community. Accompanying the rapid urbanization, an increasing number of natural lands have been utilized for constructing factories, shopping mall and skyscrapers, which greatly diminishes the natural habitats of animals, such as birds and squirrels. In this case, parks become the only place which can serve as habitats for those animals. Accordingly, the species of animals living here can become more diverse.

In addition, there are certain limitations for the other two options. Admittedly, reducing the use of plastic bags and making public transportation more accessible may also be conducive to the environmental protection in some degrees. To illustrate, if the plastic bags are prohibited, the so-called white pollution will be relieved. Also, easier access to public transportation means less use of private cars, which leads to the reduction of car exhaust. However, in comparison to planting trees and building parks, the above two measures enjoy less popularity among the residents of the community and thus are unlikely to be implemented. The underlying reason is that growing trees and constructing parks can create a more comfortable living environment while the other two choices can bring about more inconvenience. To be more specific, if shops stop the use of plastic shopping bags, the customers have to take a cloth bag while shopping. Also, taking public transportation will take longer time than driving the private cars, which means that commuters have to get up much earlier than before. It is self-evident that whether a policy can be carried out directly determines its effect, which is especially true of the above situation.

Taking what has been discussed above, we can draw the conclusion that the most effective way of protecting environment in local communities is to plant trees and create parks.

四、怎么提升托福口语

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以上就是小编今天给大家分享的内容啦，希望大家喜欢哦。虽然积累的模板可以大为我们所用，但是小编还是希望大家在平时的练习当中注意领悟积累适合自己的套句，参考优秀模版的结构布局，注意收集相关的起承转合的佳句，然后根据自身水平，把这些模版进行个性化，这样我们才能在考试中不留痕迹地运用出来，才能达到事半功倍的效果哦。